I asked one of my Media teachers, Miss Kalyan, to record her feedback onto my phone so I could then take her improvements and change it for the better. I couldn't find a way of uploading the audio file onto the blog so there is a written transcript below.
"Okay I think it suits the formality of the magazine, good use of colours that reflect the school colours. What I would say is that there needs to be more sub-headings about what is going on in school. I think the 'Misbourne Mag' needs to be a little bit bigger. You could maybe have some lines separating the three images at the top, really to emphasis that those are different photographs. You have a good range of different shots.. so you have a long shot, a close up and another long shot. Your puff doesn't really fit in with the colours, and maybe think about moving it over a bit or put it somewhere else, not sure. But I think the title does definitely needs to be bigger".
We will take all of this into consideration and produce another copy of our magazine with all the improvements added to it.
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